Narrowing

The list of what remains: 1. the poem is still somewhat messy 2. (essentially) four scenes require beefing up 3. two medium-sized scenes have yet to be written 4. one character's name may be overused 5. issues regarding the use of italics 6. issues regarding the use of ellipses 7. slight beefing up of one character (truly a minor thing, this) 8. a little more attention should be paid to the descriptions of a specific setting 9. two chapter titles might require tweaking After this list obviated, I'll read the manuscript again and mark it up as I go, I'll make those corrections, Katie will read it and mark it up, discussions will be had, I'll make corrections, I'll send it to publishers, a publisher will buy it, and then you will buy it. -Cary