Completions

I have completed the big-ass proofreading thing. It's done. All of the drunken bullshit I wrote in the first draft has been fixed, polished, or removed. The story is tight. It is coherent. It is good. I have also gone through the check list and removed everything which has been obviated through the natural course of polishing. I have seen to a handful of items which were on the list. For the next little while, I will be working my way through the list, so my blogging will mostly be related to that. There are fifty-nine items on the list. Tonight, I shall endeavor to cross off seven of them. -Cary