Big Work

This evening, I did big work in the current active chapter. This is a big chapter and it was covered in red ink. I have greened out a lot of the red ink (a lot remains) which, in the case, means I cut a lot of words. I did, however, set things up so that I can expand part of a scene in a way which is both necessary and awesome, so I'm not terribly worried about the word count. I still have a lot of work to do in this chapter, but it's in much better shape than it was yesterday at this time. -Cary Age 43